Descriptive Lead

 


Hi everyone! I'm back ! 

So last blog I expressed my want for getting task completed so here we are !

We're completing our first lead practice story. I'll be completing three of these total.

This first one will be descriptive!


Once I arrived at this camp, through the long hall and double doors, I remember the dark purple lights swallowing the whole front room with jumbo sized piranhas. I've never been to this camp so I was utterly considering just turning around and going home because this wasn't up my alley. Until this handsome, tall, fair skinned young man greeted me with the most beautiful smile I'd ever seen. I seen his curly hair spiking through the slightly soaked hoodie he had on from previously walking in the rain. "Hi",he spoke to me with such a soft tone voice and I was so appalled than anyone ever took into consideration to identify I was there, I got butterflies in my stomach. "Hello, whats your name?", I managed to push out of my mouth  and remain the steady and constant eye contact. "My name is Issac, are you new to the camp?" I knew in this moment, that he was shy or most likely didn't like speaking about himself because it was almost impossible for him to confess his identity as the beautiful person who stood in front of me. "Yes I am, but my name is Lenise, where is everyone ? Have they left the snacks out for us?" At this point, I was even shocked myself that I was making so much eye contact, he broke it and slowly moved his head to the left. He had such a mysterious demeanor to his 6'9 frame I was just so determined to figure him out, the way his lips were parted when he realized I was here, the way his legs are slightly spread away from each other, the way he scratched his ear when I asked what his name was, and most of all, why he didn't take pride in his identity.

Hope you enjoyed this descriptive lead story ! 

How'd you like it ? Sounds like something you'll read?


See you next time ! 






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